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    Past Tobi... Moon

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    Post by G man Tue Apr 09, 2013 6:38 pm

    Past Tobi... Moon 21erus1

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    Post by The ??? Tue Apr 09, 2013 7:09 pm

    1 word -> messy

    too many effects ruin it.. 6/10
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    Post by Shivam Tue Apr 09, 2013 8:20 pm

    Text, again, isn't good and as QM said, it's messy.
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    Post by T.O.R.N.A.D.O Tue Apr 09, 2013 8:34 pm

    Same reason again... 7/10.
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    Post by Maxlance Wed Apr 10, 2013 10:58 am

    Well , the white hand doesn't look fine..
    I can see the moon in the back but another circle in the front ruined the sign...

    WHAT I LIKED -

    1)The moon is so beautiful,I wished to see it completely!!
    2) I liked the spikes also!

    So,combining both, 8/10!
    If the moon was visible....9/10!!
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    Post by G man Wed Apr 10, 2013 11:03 am

    Maxlance wrote:Well , the white hand doesn't look fine..
    I can see the moon in the back but another circle in the front ruined the sign...

    WHAT I LIKED -

    1)The moon is so beautiful,I wished to see it completely!!
    2) I liked the spikes also!

    So,combining both, 8/10!
    If the moon was visible....9/10!!

    You'll be surprised but the in the render Tobi was even whiter! I adjusted his colors so he would look normal.
    About seeing the moon... I'll work on it when I have the chance Wink
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    Post by Ndk_07 Wed Apr 10, 2013 6:55 pm

    Yeah..i agree with The???..its really kinda messy..
    but den also it deserves..6.8/10..Razz
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    Post by Zenesis Wed Apr 10, 2013 8:11 pm

    1. Render didn't blend enough
    2. Less depth
    3. Lighting messy
    4. Text didn't fit (font too)
    5. BG look messy
    6. Effect look messy
    7. Stringy Flow
    8. No Light source
    9. Text to small
    10. Look like rush tag/sig

    Overall rate 4/10,i didn't really like this sig,don't just throw effect in there =_=, just need work with flow (bcuz it look to messy) nice try.

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