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    Gyarados Sign and Lucario Avatar

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    Gyarados Sign and Lucario Avatar Empty Gyarados Sign and Lucario Avatar

    Post by The ??? Sun Apr 14, 2013 7:15 pm

    I started loving gyarados now so made this after a loong time, hope im not rusted..

    V1

    Gyarados Sign and Lucario Avatar Gyarad10
    V2

    Gyarados Sign and Lucario Avatar Gyarad11

    Added a light source, some effects and more depth in the sign.. also darkened the corners more..

    Comments ? I really got annoyed by adding text..


    also a Lucario Avatar:

    Gyarados Sign and Lucario Avatar Lucaav10


    Last edited by The ??? on Mon Apr 15, 2013 11:14 am; edited 2 times in total
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    Post by The ??? Sun Apr 14, 2013 7:42 pm

    ~updated with an avatar
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    Post by Maxlance Sun Apr 14, 2013 7:43 pm

    Nice one !!
    I like gyarados so much , it's the fruit of hardwork after evolving magikarp !! Razz

    Lucario is one of my favourites...
    btw,good avatar...
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    Post by Zenesis Sun Apr 14, 2013 7:53 pm

    Gyarados

    to much sharpen at gyarados face =_="
    no depth
    no lighting
    no flow
    no light source
    BG look simple
    text to lower but nice font
    render need to blend more
    need to darken edge
    overall rate 3/10


    Lucario

    canvas to big for avatar
    Bg look nice
    need work with lighting (depth as well)
    need to darken edge
    no light source
    render need afterimage
    less flow
    add text would be great
    overall rate 5/10

    need to work hard and good luck

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    Gyarados Sign and Lucario Avatar Empty Re: Gyarados Sign and Lucario Avatar

    Post by G man Sun Apr 14, 2013 7:59 pm

    Zenesis wrote:Gyarados

    to much sharpen at gyarados face =_="
    no depth
    no lighting
    no flow
    no light source
    BG look simple
    text to lower but nice font
    render need to blend more
    need to darken edge
    overall rate 3/10


    Lucario

    canvas to big for avatar
    Bg look nice
    need work with lighting (depth as well)
    need to darken edge
    no light source
    render need afterimage
    less flow
    add text would be great
    overall rate 5/10

    need to work hard and good luck


    I was just going to post a comment like that actually.
    lol
    +1
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    Post by T.O.R.N.A.D.O Sun Apr 14, 2013 11:49 pm

    Avatar size is big imo. And Gyarados is little bit of weird.
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    Post by The ??? Mon Apr 15, 2013 10:26 am

    to much sharpen at gyarados face =_="
    no depth
    no lighting
    no flow
    no light source
    BG look simple
    text to lower but nice font
    render need to blend more
    need to darken edge

    I don't know about flow and light source but im pretty sure I darkened the corners, added depth and did some lighting..

    here's the render
    Spoiler:
    it actually has close to NO shading at all..
    canvas to big for avatar
    Bg look nice
    need work with lighting (depth as well)
    need to darken edge
    no light source
    render need afterimage
    less flow
    add text would be great
    what's afterimage? please tell me.. rest all I agree as I made it in 2 mins Razz and I don't have psd of it so can't add text now..


    @tornado: there's no way you can help me improve the sign by saying only that "its weird"
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    Post by The ??? Mon Apr 15, 2013 11:15 am

    ~UPDATED with a V2 for Gyarados.. rate it now..
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    Post by T.O.R.N.A.D.O Mon Apr 15, 2013 5:09 pm

    Text and BG in V2 is very much better than V1 ..
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    Gyarados Sign and Lucario Avatar Empty Re: Gyarados Sign and Lucario Avatar

    Post by Maxlance Mon Apr 15, 2013 6:03 pm

    I think by using the word "afterimage" Zenesis is referring to

    1. Sequential motion blurring
    2. Bloom effect (light emanating from borders of bright areas)
    3. Fading trail due to bright light source



    AFTERIMAGE:

    ~I think Lucario's parts closer to the brightness should be somewhat different from those away...
    ~You somewhat blurred the entire thing RANDOMLY............

    See Lucario's right leg, you showed shadowness in the back part and brightness in the front,even though light is EVERYWHERE !!

    Your shadowness is cartoonish (not real)

    UNREAL SHADOW:


    REAL SHADOW:


    I think I said too much !!
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    Post by The ??? Mon Apr 15, 2013 9:11 pm

    Loool! the render itself had all those light shades and detailing..
    I can't modify lucario's avatar.. so..

    anyway, what I'm asking is how's Gyara's v2? rate it..
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    Post by Maxlance Mon Apr 15, 2013 9:57 pm

    Green colour added.. cool ...Text improved .. Cooler...So 7.5/10!!
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    Post by The ??? Mon Apr 15, 2013 10:35 pm

    Yeah.. Thanx max Smile Theres nothing more to add in it imo.. So it will be this much only.. Lets see what zenny has to say..
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    Post by T.O.R.N.A.D.O Tue Apr 16, 2013 8:50 am

    So I would rate V2 8/10.
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