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AWSAN.awesome
Shivam
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New Mewtwo form
AWSAN.awesome- Leader Volkner
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EXP. Points : 4574
Posts : 338
- Post n°2
Re: New Mewtwo form
very nice!!
Maxlance- Pokemon Trainer Blue
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EXP. Points : 4951
Posts : 603
- Post n°3
Re: New Mewtwo form
Superb text,wonderful innovation of using Unowns !
For that , surely +1 !
Effects : 0.5/3
1. Depth and flow absent
2. Blending absent
3. Render usage ineffective ( It is depicted as it is, modification absent)
Background : 0.5 /2 (Nice but too simple, lacks variety)
Text : 2/2 ( Deserves applause !! )
Content and clarity : 2/3
Overall , 6/10 !
Good job !
ONE SUGGESTION :
Due to the render being white, the light source which you have used has become ineffective...
This can be solved in either of the two ways :
1.Keep the original render and use darkness(remove the light source)and instead make Mewthree glow..
2.Try a darker render(though not possible here as Mewthree is white )with light source..
For that , surely +1 !
Effects : 0.5/3
1. Depth and flow absent
2. Blending absent
3. Render usage ineffective ( It is depicted as it is, modification absent)
Background : 0.5 /2 (Nice but too simple, lacks variety)
Text : 2/2 ( Deserves applause !! )
Content and clarity : 2/3
Overall , 6/10 !
Good job !
ONE SUGGESTION :
Due to the render being white, the light source which you have used has become ineffective...
This can be solved in either of the two ways :
1.Keep the original render and use darkness(remove the light source)and instead make Mewthree glow..
2.Try a darker render(though not possible here as Mewthree is white )with light source..
Last edited by Maxlance on Fri Apr 26, 2013 3:50 pm; edited 1 time in total
Shivam- Leader Steven
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EXP. Points : 5353
Posts : 977
- Post n°4
Re: New Mewtwo form
Thanks for helping, Max!
I will try to darken render.
I will try to darken render.
T.O.R.N.A.D.O- Pokémon Trainer Red
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Posts : 1965
- Post n°5
Re: New Mewtwo form
Tbh this render looks more of cute rather than being ferocious.. Anyway for the overall sign, 7/10.
Zenesis- Leader Wallace
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EXP. Points : 4716
Posts : 592
- Post n°6
Re: New Mewtwo form
look nice but depth kinda off =_= good work btw, overall nice tag 7/10
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