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    Shivam
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    Red, The Pokémon Master

    Post by Shivam on Tue Feb 26, 2013 6:08 pm

    I think I did bad, but I'll wait to see what angat says Razz
    so..



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    Re: Red, The Pokémon Master

    Post by The ??? on Tue Feb 26, 2013 6:36 pm

    the quality for render is poor.
    too much sharpness, causing the colors to be dull.
    text is looking quite different, not matching with sign.
    not much effects
    the things on the left corner in sign steals the focus and seems pretty pointless.

    6/10
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    Re: Red, The Pokémon Master

    Post by Shivam on Tue Feb 26, 2013 6:45 pm

    Thanks for the comment and well, it's quite hard to find good renders of Red Razz


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    Re: Red, The Pokémon Master

    Post by T.O.R.N.A.D.O on Tue Feb 26, 2013 6:52 pm

    I didn't like it that much. My rating would be 7/10...


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    Re: Red, The Pokémon Master

    Post by Angat on Tue Feb 26, 2013 9:37 pm

    Since ??? said almost everything my overall is:
    Too bright [Try after making such a thing, do this create 2 new layers apply image on both and make them "Darken"]
    Not a very good render [You should focus on deviantart for renders, since there are some pretty talented renderers]
    The effect and text steal the focal point [Never make the C4D be infront of the render, if it is not part of the effect, or just put it infront of the render, when it is practically infront of the render and always make the Text's color close to the background, but alittle bit brighter/darker so it will still visible]
    Stroke effect on Red [When you make the stroke effect, making in a oposite color from the background, like this - Black Background = White Stroke and the other way around, also Stroke is best for text, and Outer Glow is best for renders]
    Placing render on an Avy [Never cut its head off, because it doesn't look good]

    Overall - 4/10 [Thats my professional comment and rating]
    Overall - 7/10 [Thats my comment comparing with some of you're older works]
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    Re: Red, The Pokémon Master

    Post by Shivam on Wed Feb 27, 2013 5:11 am

    Well these are some things I should keep in mind.
    +like Razz


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    Re: Red, The Pokémon Master

    Post by Zenesis on Wed Feb 27, 2013 8:02 am

    Avatar : to bright(BG And Render),bad render,no depth,text doesn't look really good (red color for "Red" text) and no lightning focus(Main Lightning) 4/10 = add some textures at BG and use burn tool at darken place on render

    Signature : same as above and C4D kinda spoil your sig same with text,good work btw 6/10 = add some textures and same as above
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    Re: Red, The Pokémon Master

    Post by Shivam on Wed Feb 27, 2013 8:31 am

    So we're getting more GFX-ers around here Razz
    Thanks for the comment.


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    Re: Red, The Pokémon Master

    Post by Zenesis on Wed Feb 27, 2013 8:43 am

    welcome,not a big problem


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