by Angat Tue Feb 26, 2013 9:37 pm
Since ??? said almost everything my overall is:
Too bright [Try after making such a thing, do this create 2 new layers apply image on both and make them "Darken"]
Not a very good render [You should focus on deviantart for renders, since there are some pretty talented renderers]
The effect and text steal the focal point [Never make the C4D be infront of the render, if it is not part of the effect, or just put it infront of the render, when it is practically infront of the render and always make the Text's color close to the background, but alittle bit brighter/darker so it will still visible]
Stroke effect on Red [When you make the stroke effect, making in a oposite color from the background, like this - Black Background = White Stroke and the other way around, also Stroke is best for text, and Outer Glow is best for renders]
Placing render on an Avy [Never cut its head off, because it doesn't look good]
Overall - 4/10 [Thats my professional comment and rating]
Overall - 7/10 [Thats my comment comparing with some of you're older works]