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    Diagla, the God of Time

    Post by Shivam on Thu May 09, 2013 12:28 am


    Well, nothing much to say so just C&C...



    V2



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    Re: Diagla, the God of Time

    Post by T.O.R.N.A.D.O on Thu May 09, 2013 12:31 am

    7/10.. Render doesn't look good.


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    Re: Diagla, the God of Time

    Post by Zenesis on Thu May 09, 2013 12:32 am

    lol why you post here =_=" ?


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    Re: Diagla, the God of Time

    Post by Maxlance on Thu May 09, 2013 12:53 am

    Overwhelming ! Outstanding !

    Text : 2/2 ( You're a master in that part NOW ! )
    Effects : 3/3
    Bg : 1/2
    content and clarity : 1/3


    Overall, 7/10 !

    Tips ;

    1. Afterimage (on the left side , messy) needs work..Giving a really bad look !
    2. Modify the render to show HOW IT IS AFFECTED by the overflow of light (For that use shadows, make NEARER parts brighter,farther parts less bright ,etc)



    No need of such thick borders,can be thinner (JUST MY SUGGESTION Smile )


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    Re: Diagla, the God of Time

    Post by Shivam on Thu May 09, 2013 1:59 am


    Thanks Max, I made a V2 with your help so C&C. Smile

    @Zeny: by mistake Razz


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    Re: Diagla, the God of Time

    Post by G man on Thu May 09, 2013 2:07 am

    I'm gonna be honest, I don't like it.

    Bad choise of render. (-1 point).
    Text doesn't blend quite right.
    Signature is messy and the effects aren't very good.
    Bg is somewhat okay, but it doesn't fit well with the render.
    Border should be thiner by much.

    Overall a 4/10.
    You can do better, I know you can.


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    Re: Diagla, the God of Time

    Post by Shivam on Thu May 09, 2013 2:10 am

    Well, what about V2? Is it also that bad?
    Thanks for C&C, by the way. Very Happy


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    Re: Diagla, the God of Time

    Post by G man on Thu May 09, 2013 2:16 am

    Shivam wrote:Well, what about V2? Is it also that bad?
    Thanks for C&C, by the way.

    V2 is a bit better.
    You fixed the BG. but it still doesn't fit.
    The effects of purple like light from the beam is nice though.
    On the other hand, everything is sharpen...
    5/10.
    ~KOT.

    I can see through your effects, that's a bit thing little bro. You need to keep your ways mysterious. For example you can't really tell how I make my signatures.


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    Re: Diagla, the God of Time

    Post by Shivam on Thu May 09, 2013 2:21 am

    Hm~
    I never tried to make anything mysterious... But that sounds like an good idea!

    Thanks, I'll try to make the next thing I make mysterious!


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    Re: Diagla, the God of Time

    Post by Maxlance on Thu May 09, 2013 10:42 am

    Dear friend , let me tell you what mistake you did while making the sig..

    After getting a nice render , making a successful good text and getting a beautiful light beam ,you got happy with the sig and didn't pay much attention to the background because it was required only on the left half as the right half is already filled...


    NEVER DO THIS:


    So, you tried these things (in the left part) in a hurry to complete it..


    1.Used the same color,style and effects as the beam and filed the remaining bg with that(WRONG)..

    See these parts in Dialga siggy to get what I mean:

    2.Used the light beam,faded it and fit it (WRONG) (V1)
    3.Replaced that with a dark stony bg ( Which has absolutely no relation with render ) on the upper part (WRONG)( V2)
    4.You tried to correct the border in V2 but what you did was this (WRONG) :

    Spoiler:

    NEVER ! NEVER ! NEVER !



    Instead, it would have been far better if you had kept that part simple ...

    OR

    Use effects carefully :

    Spoiler:


    1.Simple and nice


    2.Beam of light ( Don't see the light , see the render's shadow,brightness,etc)

    V1


    V2


    V3


    V4





    3. "SWIFTNESS OF THE PERSON" (IN HEAVY LIGHT) (~EXTRA)

    { TRY IN FUTURE WHEN YOU GET TIME ! Very Happy }










    You're done with the text so from now on focus on other things too (they are just as equally important) Smile


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    Re: Diagla, the God of Time

    Post by The ??? on Thu May 09, 2013 11:54 am

    I like it coz its kinda different and a new style to me.. 8/10


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    Re: Diagla, the God of Time

    Post by T.O.R.N.A.D.O on Thu May 09, 2013 12:40 pm

    Well new one does look better but still, 8/10.


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    Re: Diagla, the God of Time

    Post by Zenesis on Thu May 09, 2013 1:44 pm

    just need more depth =_=" try apply some "High Pass" (Photoshop)

    Step :-

    * Apply Image
    * Filter > Other > High Pass
    * After Click High Pass Set to "Pin Light" And Low The Opacity To 30%
    * Apply Image And Choose High Pass Again
    * And Now Set To Soft Light Low Opacity In General 20 - 30%
    * Done

    just add some depth and good luck (just try)


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    Re: Diagla, the God of Time

    Post by AWSAN.awesome on Thu May 09, 2013 2:50 pm

    v2 is better but i don't like the border and its quality,The god of time text was nice,6.5/10


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    Re: Diagla, the God of Time

    Post by The ??? on Sun May 19, 2013 4:49 pm

    Moved The Topic To The Correct Section!


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