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Shivam
The ???
G man
7 posters
Past Tobi... Moon
The ???- God
- HP : 54
EXP. Points : 5917
Posts : 1662
- Post n°2
Re: Past Tobi... Moon
1 word -> messy
too many effects ruin it.. 6/10
too many effects ruin it.. 6/10
Shivam- Leader Steven
- HP : 60
EXP. Points : 5383
Posts : 977
- Post n°3
Re: Past Tobi... Moon
Text, again, isn't good and as QM said, it's messy.
6.5/10
6.5/10
T.O.R.N.A.D.O- Pokémon Trainer Red
- HP : 56
EXP. Points : 6188
Posts : 1965
- Post n°4
Re: Past Tobi... Moon
Same reason again... 7/10.
Maxlance- Pokemon Trainer Blue
- HP : 41
EXP. Points : 4981
Posts : 603
- Post n°5
Re: Past Tobi... Moon
Well , the white hand doesn't look fine..
I can see the moon in the back but another circle in the front ruined the sign...
WHAT I LIKED -
1)The moon is so beautiful,I wished to see it completely!!
2) I liked the spikes also!
So,combining both, 8/10!
If the moon was visible....9/10!!
I can see the moon in the back but another circle in the front ruined the sign...
WHAT I LIKED -
1)The moon is so beautiful,I wished to see it completely!!
2) I liked the spikes also!
So,combining both, 8/10!
If the moon was visible....9/10!!
G man- Leader Giovanni
- HP : 19
EXP. Points : 4298
Posts : 187
- Post n°6
Re: Past Tobi... Moon
Maxlance wrote:Well , the white hand doesn't look fine..
I can see the moon in the back but another circle in the front ruined the sign...
WHAT I LIKED -
1)The moon is so beautiful,I wished to see it completely!!
2) I liked the spikes also!
So,combining both, 8/10!
If the moon was visible....9/10!!
You'll be surprised but the in the render Tobi was even whiter! I adjusted his colors so he would look normal.
About seeing the moon... I'll work on it when I have the chance
Ndk_07- Leader Pryce
- HP : 6
EXP. Points : 4266
Posts : 187
- Post n°7
Re: Past Tobi... Moon
Yeah..i agree with The???..its really kinda messy..
but den also it deserves..6.8/10..
but den also it deserves..6.8/10..
Zenesis- Leader Wallace
- HP : 36
EXP. Points : 4746
Posts : 592
- Post n°8
Re: Past Tobi... Moon
1. Render didn't blend enough
2. Less depth
3. Lighting messy
4. Text didn't fit (font too)
5. BG look messy
6. Effect look messy
7. Stringy Flow
8. No Light source
9. Text to small
10. Look like rush tag/sig
Overall rate 4/10,i didn't really like this sig,don't just throw effect in there =_=, just need work with flow (bcuz it look to messy) nice try.
2. Less depth
3. Lighting messy
4. Text didn't fit (font too)
5. BG look messy
6. Effect look messy
7. Stringy Flow
8. No Light source
9. Text to small
10. Look like rush tag/sig
Overall rate 4/10,i didn't really like this sig,don't just throw effect in there =_=, just need work with flow (bcuz it look to messy) nice try.
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