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    Shivam
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    New Mewtwo form

    Post by Shivam on Fri Apr 26, 2013 3:26 pm



    C&C


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    Re: New Mewtwo form

    Post by AWSAN.awesome on Fri Apr 26, 2013 3:40 pm

    very nice!!


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    Re: New Mewtwo form

    Post by Maxlance on Fri Apr 26, 2013 3:44 pm

    Superb text,wonderful innovation of using Unowns !
    For that , surely +1 !


    Effects : 0.5/3

    1. Depth and flow absent
    2. Blending absent
    3. Render usage ineffective ( It is depicted as it is, modification absent)


    Background : 0.5 /2 (Nice but too simple, lacks variety)

    Text : 2/2 ( Deserves applause !! )

    Content and clarity : 2/3

    Overall , 6/10 !
    Good job !




    ONE SUGGESTION :

    Due to the render being white, the light source which you have used has become ineffective...

    This can be solved in either of the two ways :

    1.Keep the original render and use darkness(remove the light source)and instead make Mewthree glow..

    2.Try a darker render(though not possible here as Mewthree is white )with light source..


    Last edited by Maxlance on Fri Apr 26, 2013 3:50 pm; edited 1 time in total


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    Re: New Mewtwo form

    Post by Shivam on Fri Apr 26, 2013 3:49 pm

    Thanks for helping, Max!
    I will try to darken render.


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    Re: New Mewtwo form

    Post by T.O.R.N.A.D.O on Fri Apr 26, 2013 4:30 pm

    Tbh this render looks more of cute rather than being ferocious.. Anyway for the overall sign, 7/10.


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    Re: New Mewtwo form

    Post by Zenesis on Fri Apr 26, 2013 7:52 pm

    look nice but depth kinda off =_= good work btw, overall nice tag 7/10


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    Re: New Mewtwo form

    Post by sondos on Sat Apr 27, 2013 1:53 am

    Lookin' Good!


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